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they dwell apart among wolves on the hills, there fear that scared of wolves they saw a big lions and they run the fastest they can the lions catch Grendel and the grendels mum went after the lions and she found Grendel with a bunch of lions watching till his mum came took Grendel then she saw the moonlight and then a jäger came and catch grendels mum  then she couldn’t fight back and sadly death for grendels mum

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  1. When choosing your symbols, you have the right idea of choosing animals that are fierce and ferocious, but how might you draw better links than wolves and lions?

    Please re-read and edit your sentnece structure – aim to use no more than one conjunction per sentence (and, but, because, also)

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